this does still feel in need of something! it isn't entirely comprehensible. perhaps moves too fast between scenes that are too compact.
as for background, i think the consistency between the three pieces could be a guide. The brown paper or variations on it, would work really well, and tie everything together as well.
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this does still feel in need of something! it isn't entirely comprehensible. perhaps moves too fast between scenes that are too compact.
as for background, i think the consistency between the three pieces could be a guide. The brown paper or variations on it, would work really well, and tie everything together as well.
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