Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Meeting with Safe House

So after meeting with Michelle from Safe House we got to discuss concerns with the storyboards, as well as finding what works.

The big matter was to address these problems practically, which some storyboards did better than others.

Here are two of them modified. The storyboard with the hands will have to be modified a bit more drastically and therefore will be posted later. I do know what I'm going to do for it, though, which is exciting!




3 comments:

Kristin said...

Fantastic work! Good job meeting with them- good luck tonight with the teen voice members.

tirtza said...

I agree. This is great!
One small note -- you might want to insure that the words visually incorporate the shape or material that hurts (at first) and then soothes. maybe even see them morph from thorny to soft (this all for the first story board).

Can't wait to see it all in motion!
Tirtza

Kristin said...

I look forward to seeing what's new this week!

Kris